Hey,
Bunch of small posts based on scribbles I've been tapping onto my iPhone (yeah, that's right iPhones, blogs, this a totally 21st century writing process).
Basically I've been stuck on Advanced Fun for a while, partly because I think I've simply been convinced I need to come up with a plot when really i should just sit with the characters for a bit and see what happens. So here we go.
I think in order to find out what happens to Mark we need to know more about him. And to do htat I need to write more about him.
So let's look at the situations he's in.
I think at the first party he needs to actually drink too much because he reasons if he loses control over himself he'll just embarass Lois and Toby
Toby is curious by this and with a bit of prodding discovers that Mark has never been properly off his face and so decides to rectify this: the two of them and Seb go on a full on bender. They start with a champagne breakfast then into the pub for first orders and off they go. Toby has to be put to bed at 5pm but Mark and Seb keep going. Eventually Lois comes looking for them, upset with what they've done to Toby but ends up going out with them and lets her hair down in a way we wouldn't have guessed so far. Seb reveals that Lois used to be quite the wild one.
This makes Lois feel more energised about the project but also convinced that this is as much for Toby as it is for Mark.
She berated Toby but not sticking it out and begines her big plan of what they should be doing.
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