I really like the idea that Mark becomes well into his dancing. Now I must justify this so people don't go, that's because he's just another extension of you and you like dancing. Well write what you know and all that.
Fuzzy attempt at rationalisation follows:
It's such a visual way of expressing joy
I like the idea he should be quickly be better at something then Lois and Toby and indeed everyone is.
I think it can work as a tension point between Lois and Toby. Toby doesn't really like dancing and isn't up for clubbing but Lois loves it and uses Mark as a cover to make him go.
Most importantly I think it's a good way of bringing in the issue of sex. He dances with confidence and panache but doesn't know how to convert it. Well no, it's less a question of knowledge although he certainly is clueless. He doesn't want it. He needs the first time to be special. Quite right too.
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