Needs writing obviously but I think I need to be a bit clearer on scenes and beats so would much appreciate it if people have anything they want to add to this.
Basically I see it as the following
On Trawangan, Sean hooks up with some fun loving Australians. He tells them about the guy with his own village and the others think that sounds rather cool and they all agree to go to Bali and check it out.
When they reach Ubud, Sean persuades them to come along to a Balinese monkey dance (a tourist attraction going on at the temple). It's an amazing experience as 50 balinese men makes rhytmic monkey noise while plays and music go on. As it goes on, Sean sees Jules across the other side. At the end she comes up to him and puts money in his hand for the room without saying anymore.
The next day Sean is woken by the Aussies who have found directions to the village and rented bikes so they all bike up there.
The narrator tells the story of the guy and the village as we see them bike up, meet the man and the village, give a donation and get ready to leave.
As they are on the way back, the Aussies suggest they race all the way back (it's mostly downhill). They're all very sporty and soon leave him far behind. He's lost in his own world and doesn't see a minivan coming past him and the van clatters into him knockng him over. The van stops and out of it comes Jules. She picks him up and puts him in the van.
When they get back to town Jules puts Sean to bed. Later after dark she comes round to see how he's doing. He's fine and persuades her to let him take her out for dinner. They find a cute little family run place off the tourist route and have a great final evening talking. They agree that there's no point acting on the attraction. Best to get on with their lives. They walk away without kissing.
The next morning Sean realises how stupid he's been and runs to get her contact details but her taxi to the airport has already left.
Back home in London, Sean is having brunch with some friends in a trendy little place. He looks at the calendar on the table and suddenly something comes back to him. This was the date she comes back to England. He says he has to leave.
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